Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Technology updates itself rather than completely destroying state, prompt is assuming the 20years future generation which is totally hypothetical, Ans here i will be in the favor of people wil
buy more cars instead of fewer car use world wide because of following reasons.
First, Because of growing demands in the society and the luxury that every person dream of, Car full filled all the demands and car is also the symbol of richness or you can say the achievement that one can show to the society, for instance if you are having a good job and the you are married then family will demand more comfort because in past you were travelling from bike but due to more people you have to buy a comfortable ride to any event hence people buy car, Yes there will be some one who will tell to book UBER instead but UBER is not availabel everywhere.
Second, Income is increasing because of lifestyle and many other factors and if you are wealthy then car is just a showcase for you you can buy aeroplane on a second thaught, for example if you have money then you can buy anything like, home car etc, due to many factors in our society the more income increase the more we buy stuff for ourselves.
Third, The Solar energy Vs Fuel, Yes there will be many people who agree on the version of not buy a car because of fuel cost and the varacity of it, but there are also people working on the solar energy, take an eg. of TESLA motors who are continuengly working on energy effiecient vehical which is the vision of elon musk (founder of TESLA motors, Top 10 Forbes billionair),
Solar energy will be next big thing on the earth which will in demand till the Sun is there and there are many manufacturers who are developing many machins which will work only works on solars
Ofcourse, There is no doubt CAR is the expensive factor and only few people can able to buy it, but you never know after 20 Years what will be the world demand and supply, due to above points mention int he Para1)Demands - Para2) Increase in Income - Para3) Solar Vs Fuel, I am strongly disagree for the statement of “ Intwenty years later there will be fewer car than todays world”.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, then, third, for example, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48984771574 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29197656307 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515228426396 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 78.0 20.1344086022 387% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 195.965915404 48.9658058833 400% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 353.8 100.406767564 352% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 78.8 20.6045352989 382% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.8 5.45110844103 327% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288832445602 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157089461094 0.076458572812 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551762204912 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14280092829 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756070854494 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.1 11.7677419355 332% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.23 58.1214874552 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.3 10.1575268817 308% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.95 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.59 8.01818996416 132% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.002688172 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.2 10.0537634409 330% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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