Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Sports are equally important as studies and universities spend so much money on sports also but it is less than money gives to libraries. I agree with the distribution of money because of several reasons. There are the following reasons explained in the following paragraphs.
First, the library is a place which is used by most of the students and faculties. To buy a new book is too expensive for every student or for a few topics, buying a new book is sometimes not worth so libraries are important. The library provides great help to students as well as faculties. In sports every student of university does not participate so we can see sports as one department of university whereas the library is open for all even sport people also access the library for literary material.
Second, the books, magazines, newspapers, journals and other printing material cost high and every year it is updated with new knowledge. Nowadays the internet is also becoming part of libraries and it is also high valued. To provide such facilities to all students requires enough budget in hand and this is one of the reasons universities should spend more money on libraries.
Third, as we discussed in the first reason, sport is only one unit of the whole body with its specific dimensions which caters to a small population in comparison to libraries. The sports activities require an optimum level of money because it is important but it should equal a library is not appropriate according to me. In my university management staff spend a large portion of the budget on libraries and as per requirement spent on sports and other departments.
Finally, the budget depends on requirements and universities should spend money on the basis of need but libraries should be on top priority. On the basis of the above discussion universities should give money to sports as it requires but libraries should get more money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, third, well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93188854489 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81500260478 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49226006192 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0181971161 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.2 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315813232016 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113392802714 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633794635781 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187857658697 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549093497036 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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