Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Universities should give the same amount of money to their students sports activities as they give to their university libraries Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students' sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Sports are very important to the physical and mental development of individuals, as such, I hold the opinion that universities should pay attention to the enhancement of sports activities amongst their students. However, I disagree with the statement that universities should allocate the same amount of money that they set aside for their libraries to students' sport because of the following reasons.
To begin with, I believe that lesser amount of money should be allocated, by universities, for students' sports than for the university libraries because more students make use of the university library than sports facilities. Every student visits the university library, at a point of his/her education, for one service or the other. Therefore, it would be logical to spend more on the facility that benefits the larger population of students. For instance, during my days has an undergraduate, I had classmates that were not inclined to taking part in any form of sports for reasons ranging from health to personal interest. This set of individuals would not benefit from whatever amount is spent on students' sport, but they would surely benefit from monies spent on the university library because we all made use of it. So, I believe that more money should be spent on university libraries than sports because more students would gain from the amount spent on the library.
In addition, university libraries should get more finance because students mainly attend universities is to get an education; and a library is central to achieving that aim. Universities are ranked based on their educational activities rather than sports. For instance, convenant university is regarded as the best university in the Nigeria but nearly no one talks about the level of sports activities at the university. So, I am of the opinion that universities should spend more on their libraries than sports because spending on libraries would further enhance their education ratings; something spending heavily on sport wouldn't.
In conclusion, I believe universities should allocate more money for the development of their libraries, than to sports, because spending more on library would have direct positive impact on the whole population of students and it would also improve their educational status.

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Suggestion: wouldn't; something spending heavily on sport wouldnt. In conclusion, I believe universities...

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the whole, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31680440771 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85183715011 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460055096419 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.3411838563 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.461538462 100.406767564 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9230769231 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372180954456 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163915548404 0.076458572812 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102961351649 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274520725486 0.150856017488 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974088434064 0.0645574589148 151% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 11.7677419355 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?

We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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