Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Education and sports have an influential and tremendous impact on our daily lives. It is utterly important to appreciate both of them because, of their indelible impact on our society. Although, some people hold the viewpoint that universities should prioritize their fund only for classes and libraries. However, others hold a contrast viewpoint that all the universities must support sports and social activities equally. My personal experience and actual observation of live, have led me to agree with the idea that the university must fund classes and libraries, sports and social activities in a same manner. In this paragraph I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
First and foremost, businesses nowadays are seeking for highly talented people, who are not expert only in their field, but also in a variety of tasks. For example, social skills, team spirit and others. Moreover, by playing foot ball, colleagues may get to learn how to communicate with each other and absorb the idea of teamwork. This would be essential for their future job. In stead of insisting on their own idea or work a lone, they would taught how to participate with others and share notions.
Furthermore, enrolling in many sports activities might aid students in relieving their stress and studying pressure. For instance, we have many requirements to achieve in school, we are spending a lot of time in doing homework and extra curricular courses, and many stuff that our teachers asked us to accomplish. Our brain may get tired and loose concentration. As a consequence, we might not perform well. So taking a rest and do exercises or, playing volley ball will refresh our mind, and assist us in improving our duties, and will finish our task in a good way.
Last but not least, supporting a gym will not cost a lot as compared to the classes or libraries. Instead of buying extra desks or a variety of modern books, they can support extra tredmells. Moreover, every time I need to run on a tredmill, I have to put my name on a waiting list, and sit for few minutes until get my turn. While, if I go to the library to study, I would not face this issue, since many desk were available.
In a nutshell, judging all what I have mentioned above, taking all factors into considerations, I would reinforce my idea that classes, libraries, sports and social activities are equally important to get relax, ameliorate our skills, and secure a perfect future career.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tivities might aid students in relieving their stress and studying pressure. For ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun stuff seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much stuff', 'a good deal of stuff'.
Suggestion: much stuff; a good deal of stuff
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun desk seems to be countable; consider using: 'many desks'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2036.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8824940048 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74801310138 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558752997602 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8552000317 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9523809524 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.80952380952 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156178759611 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436035116677 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504670924087 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838214088106 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576195508905 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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