Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Todays, universities mostly concentrate on study of students rather than their physical activities. As far as universities’ program is concerned some are of the opinion that universities should spend large portion of allocated budget for libraries while others believe that sport activities have a same importance in this issue. I-for one- subscribe to the latter idea. The reasons why I believe so are manifold- three of which, however, are of great consequences: promoting student’s health, helping students to find and nurture their talents, and also providing more jollification for the students.
To begin with, being healthy is one the most crucial facets that can help the progress of children in any major, especially in learning lessons. There in a Persian proverb that states, “ Healthy body is prerequisite for a sharp mind”. Being this in mind, universities should do their best to make proper and well-organized workout programs for the students and spends as much money as possible for improving sport centers in the college.
Second, different humans have diverse abilities and talents that learning science is one of them. So, maybe some students have a talent in sports while they are weak in some lessons like mathematic. Therefore, spending more money in libraries could be a waste of time and money, while this money could be spend for sport and find some great talent in many sports fields. For instance, who can imagine that Lionel Messi be a mathematic instead of soccer player?
The last but not the least reason that reinforces preceding assertion that enough money should spend in the children’s sport activities has to do with the happiness and energy that these activities can bring about among the young people. For example, according to the latest statistics, universities that have a better sports program have the graduates that are more successful and satisfied by their job. Because sports are amusing and are the best way to remove mental ennui and recharge batteries to resume studying.
All in all, I do believe that universities should consider the libraries and sports activities in same consequence on the ground that sport activities promote the health of the students, help to find their talents, and also makes universities more interesting and efficient for students. So, I hope, one day, the authorities concerned with this issue in universities come to their senses and take proper measures to make sport facilities for students in universities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2121.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27611940299 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88658950156 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522388059701 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.4402223732 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5625 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278155491058 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931808297059 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708773906487 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17686174096 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622594766175 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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