Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When people succeed, it is entirely because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with their success. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
As everything in life is like a coin that has two different sides, people must weigh the pros and cons before jumping to conclusions. After all, each and every question or topic requires careful deliberation in that there are always multiple variables to a truth. Even though some may adamantly believe that people are successful because they are lucky, I, personally think that hard work is the only tool that can help one achieve their goals. Success can have a different meaning to different people. For some individuals, being successful correlates with a job promotion whereas, for others, it may equate to getting good marks. One common thing that ensures success is hard work.
Success is often a result of a sequence of correct decisions and many small victories. This happens gradually, contrary to the belief that success is an overnight feat. Successful people often claim that they took small and planned steps in order to ensure that they emerge victorious in the end. Stroke of luck is generally perceived as a one-time event. For instance, when I was in university, I knew I had to stay focused and study well in order to score good grades. These grades will ensure that I am well equipped to secure a decent job. If I had not studied during my exams and relied completely on luck, I would not be in the position that I am today.
I resonate with the idea, ‘The more hardworking you are, the luckier you get.’ Continuing with the example stated above, assuming that someone who scored less than me got lucky and landed a job in the same firm as me. The chances of him getting promoted without putting in the effort are slim. One has to work diligently and persistently to climb the ladder and get a promotion. The company will judge and analyze you based on the effort you have put into the company and not on the grounds of your luck. Therefore, to achieve anything in life, one has to put in the effort.
For some people, being a success is having a family. This also requires a lot of effort and time. You have to make ends meet and make things work. For instance, my mother claims that she is successful since she believes she raised her kids well because we are independent and socially responsible human beings.
In summation, yes, it is virtually impossible to provide a completely satisfying answer to an open-ended question. Although the jury may be out on this give essay topic, we can mutually agree that success is more hard work and less luck due to the reasons mentioned above.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, after all, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2074.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68171557562 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50846443997 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562076749436 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6426145602 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4166666667 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4583333333 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199739876867 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458661684058 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419209408524 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100678494457 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274039464707 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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