When you face a difficult problem in life, what do you feel is the best way to solve it?
-asking someone with more experience for advice about the problem
-finding information about the problem using the Internet
-taking a long time to think about the problem
As everything in life is like a coin that has two different sides, people must weigh the pros and cons before jumping to conclusions. After all, each and every question or topic requires careful deliberation in that there are always multiple variables to a truth. Even though some may adamantly believe that internet is the ultimate solution to all problems, I strongly disagree. If I am faced with adversity, my first reaction would be to consult someone who may have experienced something similar in life. I think that problems cannot be solved by googling them, sometimes, we need advice that needs a human touch. I also think that dealing with certain problems alone is very difficult and oftentimes result into depression because we cannot process it without any help. In this essay, I will try to delve into this topic and elaborate on the same.
I think by discussing our problems with someone who has witnessed the same situation can be very useful because they have experienced the problem first hand. Due to this, they can provide valuable insights since they have already tackled the situation. This will save time because they can assist us in making the right choice. I think there is something one can learn from everyone. By discussing our problems and concerns with someone who can relate will be considerably easier than talking about it to someone who has no prior experience. Knowledge is power and by taking advice from them we can avoid making the same mistakes they did. For instance, when I was working in a law firm, the job was very demanding and stressful. When I returned home, I was tired and exhausted. My parents tried to talk to me and encouraged me to discuss my issues with them, however, I did not expect them to possibly understand my situation. In contrast to that, I was very comfortable discussing about the same with my coworker. Since she was my senior, she advised and assisted me.
Another advantage of talking to someone who has had a similar experience is that one can address the same problem from a different perspective. Sometimes the solution is quite simple but because we are so tensed and worried, the problem appears to be bigger than what it actually is. For instance, my friend has a terrible headache for 2 consecutive days. She googled her problem and self-medicated herself. Due to this, her headache amplified, because of that she had been admitted to the hospital. Had she consulted with an experienced doctor, this situation could be avoided.
In summation, yes, it is virtually impossible to provide a completely satisfying answer to an open-ended question. Although the jury maybe out on this give essay topic, we can mutually agree that the best way to handle a difficult situation is to discuss it with someone wise and capable enough to help and guide us.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, may, so, after all, for instance, i think, in contrast, talking about, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2343.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 483.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85093167702 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67212800582 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534161490683 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 747.9 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9872532651 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1153846154 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5769230769 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228147560078 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569896713083 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581389936331 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126529385176 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394885230021 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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