Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the civilized and modernized society, the history of every culture will be one of the most important values in the world. Today it is axiomatic that every society must back to their history to learn a way to improve their life. A plethora of people possesses the conviction that history must be one of the courses which should be studied despite the major of the student field, besides they find a more positive effect. Whereas others might hold exactly the opposite view. Although some believe that students must concentrate on their own lesson, I believe that every member of society must have a great concept of knowing their own history. In follows, I am going to aptly delve into the most outstanding reason to advocate my point of view.
The fist exquisite point to be mentioned is that history is a basic matter if every culture. In order to be successful and live effectively man should know from their culture because every individual belongs to a culture and more in history which must familiar with to improve the ability of good living. For example, learning about our ancestor that means leaning the way of their life also learning their experience help us to make fundamental of our life. I remember when I study about the revolution in my country, I realized that we are not a kind of society that cruelty and tyrant dominate on them. men of my country stood in front of the enemy for eight years and take their destiny in own hand. The important point here is that this story learns me to stand in front of problems and work hard to solve them. Consequently, I would not succeed in my career had I not study the history of my country.
Accordingly, I should be stressed that history has roots in people's spirits.
Another noteworthy point supporting this opinion is that as a psychological view by learning history students train their brains. Moreover, noteworthy statistics reveal that the number of neurons used by brian in the time in which man learns history increased and the brain start to be more active. Accordingly, it improves the productivity of the brain.
To put it briefly, history is based on the culture of the country and it will improve the ability of the student in future life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Men
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, briefly, consequently, if, moreover, so, whereas, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73778920308 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53458443638 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501285347044 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1611965646 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.388888889 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6111111111 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195428120344 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607769255789 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441975389684 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108215901569 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032951174763 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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