Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Even though there is a prevailing view that telling the truth is not a good way in relationship, I strongly recommend that telling the truth has a significant role in every condition and circumstance. Truth intensifies reliability. In addition, it provides an optimistic view of the future. And believe it or not, it increases the confidence.
First of all, generally we can just rely on persons who don’t lie in every situation. Lie definitely results to decrease the reliability and eliminates intimacy between people. For instance, last year when I was at university I had a girlfriend who told me a big lie about her family. Nevertheless, she had an affectionate and sensitive behavior; I couldn't be committed with her.
Moreover, personally I believe that truth dramatically gives us an optimistic view of the future. When we tell the truth and avoid of lying consequently we can see our environment and our world better. If I want to clarify this point, I can bring an example that I have learnt from my favorite author, Kasravi, who was an erudite and respectful person in my country. He said every lie sits on your heart and causes a dark point in your view. These lies and therefore their influence on our life cause a cynical and pessimistic view of the future, and may be resulted to commit a crime or a detrimental work.
Last but not least, confidence and truth have had a close relationship for years. If we consider ancient cultural values, we can easily find value of the truth and its effects on self-confidence and boldness of a person. For instance, Dariush, who was a predominant and vigorous king in Persia, declared his truth and its role in his community in different inscriptions.
In conclusion, as a student I definitely believe we should be truthful in our life because we need be more reliable, more sanguine and more assurance. Nonetheless as I become more sophisticated and more experienced my opinions and my thoughts may be changed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91071428571 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07861263 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568452380952 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.399379867 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0972313340087 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344800845624 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421295355358 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0596996311989 0.150856017488 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399550829027 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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