Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Is obivios that sports and social actives is necessary and good for a college our university students. Therefore, I agree with the statemant that "At universities and college, sports and social activities are just as important as class and libraries and shoud recive equal financial support" and I have two reasons to support my opinion, since that the two activites is essencial and need be applyed to students.
First, sport is essencial for a helth life and need be offered for all students. The necessity of the students doing a fisical exercice have been mentionated for expecialist and they need do that. However, in many times this activites doesn't have a good financial support, doing hard to develop this activeties. For exemple the college that I studed, didn't have any support for students doing fisical execise and this was horrible for studens. Thus, if we recived a little of money to invest in sports, I belive that this would be many differences on the life of students.
Second, it is necessary the students do social actives for intelectual growth. Although can bee simple some social activeties is necessary a minimal of money to develop this. Actually, there are some schools that make much social activity with the students and they can see goods feedback. For instance, when I was in high school, my teacher of fisical exercise make a small project with the instituition thar treat the old people. In the begin, was very strange for us, however with the time we was normal for us. With this activity, I could get more atention for people and make me better. Since I was being the good for other peoples.
Third, doing social activities is good for development of the students. Since one person make the beeter for other, they usually ever do the best for the people. As I read a intervew in a pscology journal said that is essential for children make social action, and is important that all schools make some with the students. Since this activeties helpe make the personality of the people and the student and making good for them.
In conlusion, I agree with the argument, and I guess that is necessary a investment in sport and social activets for all students. However, when the school doesn't have a money need doing the cheap activities to do the best for the students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, thus, for instance, i guess
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84886649874 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58199299303 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450881612091 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0641054675 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.25 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.85 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1890584307 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703051237204 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734387731963 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14204209402 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103173683367 0.0645574589148 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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