Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, most of the universities are turning liberal art programs, giving the opportunity to develop students themselves by choosing their own interests. For me, I would like to agree with this statement of the topic because of some reasons.
The first reason of all is the students should study for real life, that obtaining both of academic knowledge and out of school skills. For instance, supporting sports or social activities develop the students' health, communication skills, teamworking, and life science knowledge. For giving these various qualifications to students, universities have to fund equally to the social activities and classes. On the other hand, receiving financial will make students comfortable to study and their active life.
The second reason is students are taking their interest on their matter of subjects while supporting their self-development. Receiving the financial support equally is giving to the opportunity to make more funnier to the campus life. People will meet each other with same interests or purposes is motivating themselves, and influenced each other more efficiently. For me, I always wish my university would have giving the financial support to both equal because I always used to look for out of class activities to attend such as soccer, musical instrument lessons, or swimming.
The last reason of it is the financial support meaning the developing the building of activity halls and libraries. The goal of the university is graduating academical students and improving the rank of themselves in international rankings. While this environmental improvement, students are taking various advantages of this change due to their spending free time will get more efficient.
For these reasons, I would like to agree with this statement of the topic. Receiving financial support on colleges sports and social activity is important for students by health, self-development, meeting the same interested friends, and the campus's environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 201, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...sports or social activities develop the students health, communication skills, teamworki...
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Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'funnier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: funnier
...ly is giving to the opportunity to make more funnier to the campus life. People will meet ea...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, while, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53442622951 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05696169112 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508196721311 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6884546916 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.533333333 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238586743726 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907521040548 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583561386574 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144516229746 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542156974404 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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