Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the past, in some countries, especially Asian, only professionals, doctors or intellectuals are highly respected int he society. These days, there has been a change of the perception of the community, for more emphasise has been put on sports and social activities. In terms of education, it is important to invest on sports and outdoor activities for students to attend.
To begin with, there is no denial that a good health is the grounding factor for a person to achieve their goals in life. Only by playing sports can people train their body and mind, preparing the best condition to get to work. Research has proved that playing sports can be an effective therapeutic method in reducing stress. Concerning that students are often under the pressure of exams, outdoor activities will help them to relax as well as exercise.
furthermore, a full growth is becoming popular with a great deal of parents around the world. In addition to academic studying, students may have a special talent of a particular sports, such as karate, volleyball or basketball. Therefore, schools should try their best to help them training and pursue their dreams.
Last but not least, sports and other activities provide students with crucial social skills that can only be taught in reality. Sports teaches students about sportsmanship and solidarity. For example, in football, members in the team will have to understand each other in order to win a game. That is the lesson about cooperation. Besides that, presentation, coordination or financial management skills will be of great importance to students in the long run.
In conclusion, sports and social activities are not only helpful to students physical condition but also their mental health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...p them to relax as well as exercise. furthermore, a full growth is becoming popular with...
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Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to train' or 'train'.
Suggestion: to train; train
...ools should try their best to help them training and pursue their dreams. Last but no...
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Line 9, column 68, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ocial activities are not only helpful to students physical condition but also the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 283.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18021201413 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83508519269 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586572438163 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2026538227 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.625 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113885001522 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375140854055 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319448424231 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660377032661 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196197418746 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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