Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Universities and colleges are the places which helps to develop person's physical, mental and social well being along with their intellectual well-being. Universities and colleges should not be limited to just academics, but rather should be all-encompassing which should focus on all round development of a student. Sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries. So, I strongly agree with the author prompts that as like the academical field, sports and social activities should be given equal financial support.
Every person has their own talents and interests. Universities should deploy it's finance on exploring the divergent talents and interests of their students. If the students are just compelled on the specific subjects without seriously underscoring their needs and desires, it cannot develop them effectively. So, if universities or any colleges just focus on grades of students, it cannot simply affect all students effectively because all students cannot have similar desire on academics rather some of them might like to be a good sportsmen or social activist in future. These different dreams cannot be fulfilled by just the academics field of any universities or any college. So, with the same respect and proportion, the administration of any college or university should also invest same financial support to the fields like sports and social activities as like the academics field. For example; If Sachin Tendulkar was in the college where there was no such focus on sports like cricket, then could he achieve what he has achieved now in the field of cricket, as so called as "master of cricket". He might performed well in academics but how about his dreams- aren't they important ?
It is very crucial to every person to be physically, mentally and socially well-being. The availability and access of these diverse fields in the college or university surely helps to enhance the all-round well-being of the person. Intense mental pressure and stress which is frequent in the field of academics is pacified by other fields like social activities and sports which are entertaining and friendly in nature. For example; many good universities helps to keep up with sports and social activities like tour, expedition, games etc, to revitalize their students from intense load of academics, which will affect them positively in long run. Similarly, sports and social activities are very important to keep up mentally and socially strong which is very crucial in performing any activities efficiently. For example; a physically and socially well-being person can be better in business and also can learn faster than a sick and socially-awkward person.
Due to these above different reasons, universities and colleges should give equal priority to sports and social activities too as like the academics. They should support these all fields equally with finance .Only then the performance of the students will be better as desired and also helps to keep the university in a good faith with parents and students.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, then, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 13.8261648746 239% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2588.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 486.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32510288066 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90795714664 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440329218107 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 805.5 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0307868379 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.4 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.65 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224748618869 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902303098114 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790179654991 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178455111571 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620227888802 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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