Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
In today's advanced and intricate world, planning plays a crucial role in any individual's life, since a person plan his or her life so that they can grasp any moments in their lives for a better and satisfying future. With this in mind, a debate exists as to whether or not young strata of the society must be able to plan and organize. As far as I am concerned, organizing and planning have high priority in this world thanks to several factors, two of which are of great importance in comparison to others, which are elaborated upon hereunder.
To begin with, one of the most consequential keys to open the door of success is being organized and plan as much as possible. With the new style of the modern society, which is changing day after day, it is essential for people to plan their lives, to be more specific, for young people. Although it is plausible that a person cannot obey all the plans he or she make, these planning will be helpful for them so that they can be successful in future. For example, a well-known doctor, whose name is Dr.Hesabi, in one of his famous books, emphasize the fact that "Planning is the keystone to survive in this competitive world." Statistics demonstrate that most of the famous, successful people, namely doctors, professors, and politicians, to name but a handful, are a "planner-addict." Thus, it can be inferred from these statistics that planning have a positive effect on people's lives On the other hand, any individual who is not well organize may lost his or her way half way through their lives, or even understands that he or she may waste a large amount of their precious lives on the events that are not even related to their path of success, which rarely happens with the people who have plans.
Secondly, everyone knows that the chance of life is a one-time opportunity. Therefore, it is crystal clear that people, from the advent of humanity, are thriving to build a bright future for him- or herself. Additionally, people use any helps or ideas, which pave the way for a prosper ad attractive future such as planning and organizing their lives, since nobody wants to take this one-time opportunity for granted. Moreover, a saying comes to mind, which equivalent in English might sound like, " Do not neglect any little plans, even they may seem not beneficial, since people built their future step by step with the means of organizing little events." Without any shadow of doubt, this little, negligible events can have indirect effects on people's lives. It is worth mentioning that people will notice every little things in this society if they make plans for most of their accomplishment in lives. In contrast, individuals, who do not pay attention to these little things, might suffer from its consequences, because they will affect the whole picture, which is their life in the long run.
To sum up, by taking into account all the above mentioned factors, we can depict that people, who have planning and organizing in their life will be more successful and fulfilled in their lives as compared to others on the other side of the road. I, personally, suggest that people pay more attention to these abilities among their knowledge and other factors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...d, planning plays a crucial role in any individuals life, since a person plan his or her li...
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Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
...ure. With this in mind, a debate exists as to whether or not young strata of the society must be abl...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...son cannot obey all the plans he or she make, these planning will be helpful for the...
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Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...for them so that they can be successful in future. For example, a well-known doctor, whos...
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Line 3, column 504, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hesabi
..., a well-known doctor, whose name is Dr.Hesabi, in one of his famous books, emphasize ...
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Line 3, column 778, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...politicians, to name but a handful, are a 'planner-addict.' Thus, it ca...
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Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... helps or ideas, which pave the way for a prosper ad attractive future such as planning a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, in contrast, such as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2697.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 556.0 407.700716846 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85071942446 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85588840946 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80033314376 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494604316547 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 839.7 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 4.94265232975 303% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.1344086022 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 162.267050123 48.9658058833 331% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.8 100.406767564 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0666666667 20.6045352989 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 5.45110844103 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214990102589 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837191563865 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436013589389 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135090578922 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326882261616 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 11.7677419355 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 58.1214874552 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.1575268817 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.0537634409 167% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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