Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Future is the greatest concern for people around the world. Each individual is worry about the extent of what today's action consequence is in future. Thus, some people are determined that when they are young they should have the ability to plan and organize. Opinions on this issue are divided. My own considered opinion is that it is critical for juveniles to have this ability. The reasons why I think so, are manifold,however, three of which, having the magnificient reasonings are elaborated upon hereunder.
First and foremost, in order to achieve your goals you need to paln for it successively; try to attian each step and having sub-plans, until you will achieve the main goals. For instance, I had a friend, whom was ingenious, and gifted by having a created mind. She loved to be a musician in famous music band. Depite of her ingiunety, she could not organize her schedule, to not only flourish her collage exams, but also practice her music--piano, adaquetly. It was crystal clear that in future owing to lack of practice and not having a specific plan, she did not attain her goal. She became depressed and quit music for long time; And now she play music only as her hobby. As can be inference, lacking such an ability will harm ones life, future and dreams.
Second, organization is a key to having a proprouse future. If ones is unable to be organize, he/she will never attain plans that had once. Because, in order to be successful you should do everything on time. There is great quote by a wise man "Do not stop when you are tired stop when you are done." Time is as percious as gold. Morover, doing as what ones have planned before needs organization. For example, I am the person who always have plans, and know what I want to gain. On the other hand, I am an unorganized person, As can be demonstrated, I am also the one who is no successful, owing to the fact that i do not have the ability to organize my schedule to attian what I need.
The last reason which will reinforce the pervious ones is that if young people are unable to have the ability to plan. They cannot understand the reason why they are alive. Consequently, they will get depressed and maybe even commite suicide. Thereby, having these abilities not only will gurantee a great future, but also it will ensure people that they will be happy.
To sum up, I am a great believer that with out having abilites of planning and oranizing, future is nothing more than a catasterophe.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, i think, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2041.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63863636364 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62142219775 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2963819716 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.64 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222057361277 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626977120033 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484889049977 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122020570996 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321335327093 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.