Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Living in a rapidly changing society, the young generation is facing unprecedented complexities from various aspects, such as pursuing degrees, hunting jobs, dealing with environment issues, etc.. Some of us aware that it is critical for them to learn how to plan and organize, so they can solve these problems effectively. Personally, I agree with this opinion.
To begin with, it is widely acknowledged that the ability to plan and organize pave the way for their future development. Technology has witness a dramatic boom in recent years, introducing new innovations to the world almost every day, which makes our life more convenient as well as more complicate. Computer software, cellphone applications and state-of-the-art electronic devices alter our lifestyle completely. So people need to be able to organize and utilize those resources to enrich themselves, otherwise, they will be confused and overwhelmed by the massive amount of information. For example, online education, which allows students can attend various classes whenever and wherever, is very popular now. They can watch various kinds of lecture videos on the Internet and interact with teachers and classmates. Therefore, students who make use of this platform can broaden their knowledge and thus lay a solid foundation for life.
Moreover, people who master the skill of plan and organize are more likely to achieve success in their careers. By managing time wisely, they can improve work efficiency. Due to fierce competition in society, people attach great importance to productivity. Take myself for instance, being a graduating student, I have a tight schedule with a lot of schoolwork at the end of this semester. So I made a to-do list and did a lot of things including searching information online, reading books, and writing essays according to it. In the end, I finished those tasks on time with quality. In addition, people with high efficiency can leave a favorable impression on others and create a harmonious relationship with coworkers. Consequently, they have more opportunities to exchange ideas and receive advice.
From what has been discussed above, I draw a conclusion that it is essential for youngsters to have the ability to plan and organize because it helps them to develop and accomplish in modern society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31607629428 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00160202927 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632152588556 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1101617679 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.684210526 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3157894737 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215891167612 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568100899438 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431749173346 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134672172398 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292963276446 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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