Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As one reaches adulthood, he is faced with a variety of choices and decisions, ranging from career development to personal life. To take control of one’s life in a complex society, I agree that the ability to plan and organize is necessary for young people, due to reasons in one’s career, relationships and life.
To start with, the ability to plan is essential for career development. This is because clear plans are necessary in all stages of the career, from job hunting, implementing projects at work to collaboration with colleagues. For example, when looking for a job, one usually applies for several positions with different job descriptions and requirements at the same time. In this case, a clear plan of preparing for CV and cover letters accordingly, contacting recruiters and scheduling interviews is particularly important for finding an ideal job successfully. Therefore, the ability to plan is important for one's career.
Furthermore, this ability is indispensable to developing and maintaining interpersonal relationships. Indeed, carefully planned events, which need time management skills, can express care and support for loved ones such as family and friends. For instance, holding a warm surprise party for a friend's birthday requires several steps, from inviting people to buying cakes to making reservation at the restaurant, each of which needs to be planned ahead. In turn, a well-planned and impressive party will no doubt be helpful to keep relationship with friends.
Last but not least, a healthy lifestyle benefits from the ability to make plans. While people tend to spend time after work laid back relaxed, organized plans pave the way for a healthy life. One needs to make plans for everyday errands, such as doing laundry, going to the grocery, reloading gym cards and paying rents, and only after these chores are finished, he can have a life with high quality, like having a balanced diet and abundant exercises.
In conclusion, the ability to plan and organize is beneficial for young adults, which makes it essential in modern life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 43.0788530466 21% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30538922156 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95887919924 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583832335329 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9639385763 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.133333333 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 5.45110844103 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275942860623 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103843454605 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632903525034 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169860269495 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392366063803 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.