Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.
Education is one of the essential pillars of life. Without education, a person will not survive in this world. Hence, it is mandatory for the children to achieve higher education. some people think that it is very difficult for children to get their education because they busy in other ordinary tasks which diverted their concentration, while other would disagree. I certainly believe that children are facing difficulty in accomplishing their education because they spend their crucial time in other activities like playing games, using cell phones and busy in social media.
First, the full concentration of the children is diverted and divided into the different activities. Like, in past, children don't have easy access to the internet and they retained their full concentration toward their studies. However, children can reachable to the internet through wifi connections. For instance, when I compare my childhood with my nieces, I feel so much different. In my childhood, we didn't have the internet so we studied all the time. On the other hand, when I see my niece today, she always busy in her mother Iphone and playing online games like candy crush and wasting her crucial time. She started crying when her mother took a phone from her hand. It shows me the clear difference that due to fast technology children don't concentrate on their studies.
In conclusion, children should maintain their concentration so that they can get a higher education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, so, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 238.0 407.700716846 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14705882353 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73858377869 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584033613445 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 618.680645161 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The sentence length is short
Sentence length SD: 47.2805888461 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202728686463 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628683601079 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510479717982 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132412096762 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452764157234 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.