Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online
games, and social networking Website.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Technology in modern days plays a vital role in humans life. People are so attracted to that they cannot think about anything without technology. However, I do not agree with the statement provided by the author. Because not only technology hampers the productivity of the student but also overall not an effective use of the technology.
To begin with, before emerging the technology it was difficult for the teacher to make coherent of their classes. Now, teachers can easily provide online tuition to the student and student also able to repeat the classes when needed. Moreover. student can also attend to the virtually without presenting in the class. For instances, a few years ago when I was in college I was very sick and my exam was nearby. I was worried about my exam because I was not physically fit to attend the class. But, online classes make it possible to attend the class without present physically. So, this clearly shows that technology is very effective in some education sector.
Second, some websites are also playing a prominent role to help people. some channel in youtube uploads various informative videos which is very essential for the student. Also, they provide different techniques, analysis on the specific topic. For particulars, I am recently started studying English but do not know where to start. So, I started watching youtube channel and recognize that they provide good material which is very helpful. Moreover, watching those videos now I master in some rules of grammar and also fluent in English. This is happened because of technology.
Finally, frequent access to the cell phone, social networking offers student always in touch with the other friends. For example, sometimes teacher offer group project and social networking groups provide this opportunity to discuss within the group without present physically. I can remember when I was in school sometimes it was difficult for me to present in every the group discussion. I think it is a great opportunity in the modern era.
To recapitulate, cell phones, social networking websites make people life easier but if we misuse that oppertunity we will be great trouble in future. Therefore, I think using that opportunity without exploiting it and make the technology more productive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Suggestion: Some
...laying a prominent role to help people. some channel in youtube uploads various info...
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Suggestion:
...uch with the other friends. For example, sometimes teacher offer group project an...
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...at oppertunity we will be great trouble in future. Therefore, I think using that opportun...
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Suggestion:
...nd make the technology more productive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17694369973 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70978875546 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517426273458 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3798637535 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.4583333333 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5416666667 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.79166666667 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155525113333 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449490812095 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436023570922 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850838066355 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223281850046 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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