Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
class="open">open discussion
The class="open">open discussion class="is">is very important in our class="life">life. class="when">when class="you">you class="discuss">discuss opening class="you">you may not bother from someone's openion. Some students prefer classes with class="open">open discussions between the professor and students. otheres disagree. In class="my">my view, the class="open">open discussion class="have">have positive class="role">role in every class="aspect">aspect of education of studants.
The main class="reason">reason class="is">is class="that">that studants class="can">can class="progress">progress on their exams. class="when">when class="you">you class="can">can class="discuss">discuss very easy on class class="you">you don't annoy to question of yours teacher and class="you">you adn advance very fast. For example, class="when">when I was in elemontary school class="that">that there was where I didn't like it because I was always shyness. Unfortunately, I got very low grade on class="my">my exam class="that">that this events gave me sense of awkward. after years, I passed on exam of arrival talent high school where all of studants tried to become number one in school. However, the bad memory of class="my">my elemontary school hesitated me if I could do it. one day, one of class="my">my teacher announced class="that">that chimestry class would be class="open">open discaussion and everybody had to participate in all of subjects. class="when">when I were turned to speake I was vary panic and asked class="my">my teacher I didn't do it but he encouraged me just started. after this occurenese, I demanded class="my">my qeustion without shy and I liked to contribute class="my">my freinds. In addition, I could get high grade on all of class="my">my exam class="that">that I became famous in the school. this event causes class="that">that I class="progress">progress im class="my">my class="life">life. As class="you">you class="can">can see, the class="open">open discussion class="progress">progress in your classes.
Second class="reason">reason class="is">is class="that">that class="open">open discussion class="can">can gives confidence all of studants. class="when">when class="you">you see all of students participate in class causes class="you">you do too and class="you">you advance in speaking. For instance, class="when">when I was underdegree and I was studing a mechanic engineering what needed social personality. Unfortunalty, I was very shyness and I evaded to opt class="open">open discussion classes because I didn't believe myself. after goes time, I surprisingly admited in master university where had to get class="my">my degree I obliged conferonse in final thesis. I was very anxiety what I did class="that">that meantime class="my">my freind suggested class="that">that I registered on class="open">open discaussion. Then I decided to go to this classes where I had to speaking with other membar. class="that">that was amazing because I could speak fluently and I attained confident for final thesis and I got high score in class="my">my class. Forthermore, I could were accepted by class="my">my manager faculty class="that">that I would be TA mathamatic. Due to I could advance quickly. this exprence taught me class="that">that class="open">open discussion may rise advancmet in yours career.
In sum, the class="open">open discussion certainly class="have">have positive class="role">role in every class="aspect">aspect of yours class="life">life. Wthere class="you">you class="can">can class="progress">progress on their exams or rise confidence. class="you">you should be register in class="open">open discussion class speaking.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, second, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 89.0 43.0788530466 207% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4024.0 1977.66487455 203% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 473.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 8.50739957717 4.8611393121 175% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.60160768155 2.67179642975 322% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469344608879 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1143.9 618.680645161 185% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.4 1.51630824373 158% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.949852403 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.133333333 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7666666667 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63333333333 5.45110844103 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.5376344086 433% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.024265472131 0.236089414692 10% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0175384937875 0.076458572812 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0173765161493 0.0737576698707 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0178085743115 0.150856017488 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00927298496935 0.0645574589148 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.5 11.7677419355 225% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -11.43 58.1214874552 -20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.6 10.1575268817 183% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 31.78 10.9000537634 292% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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