Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Choosing a future job has always been a critical task for many kids. Many parents prefer for their kids a job that they always dream off. They think that children should not choose a career that is similar to their parents. However, personally, I believe that kids should choose a job similar to their parent’s career.
Kids who Copy their parents’ job always find jobs easily. Parents always think about their kid’s future, so they try to secure their kid’s career by letting them choose the same job that the parents have. By then, the job would be secured for their kids. As an example, my dad used to work in Saudi Airlines. He told my brother that if he would study business like him, my father would secure him a job position in Saudi Airlines. After my brother’s graduation from business school, he worked at the same airlines that my dad used to work, and he did not struggle to find jobs as his colleges did.
Another point besides securing jobs is that having the kids choose the same job would reduce the number of mistakes after they work. It has been said before “learn from an expert”. Imagine if this expert is the parents, the kids would learn faster and they would know every technique about their parent’s job which would decrease the number of future errors in the same job. For instance, Khabib is a Russian fighter who played 23 games without any loss. The secretase behind his continues winning is that his father was a fighter too. He taught Khabib all the fighting tricks and techniques that after a time served Khabib a lot. Now, Khabib is the world number one fight champion for the year 2018.
While, some people might say that kids should choose the job that they feel passionate about, not a job that their parents have. Yet, passion is not enough for any job success. Many people achieve their career passion, although they did not succeed. For example, Nick Cannon, his passion was acting, however, he did not act very well. Therefore, he quit acting and did something else. Sometimes doing what you are not passioned about can lead you to succeed. A famous example is Cardi B. When she was five, she wanted to be a doctor. On the other hands, now she is a famous rapper who succeeded in this career that did not represent her passion from the beginning.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that kids should choose the same job that their parents have. I feel it in this way because kids would secure their jobs in the future and they can learn from their future job mistakes early enough.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2120.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69026548673 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3008126265 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471238938053 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0560219551 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7142857143 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1428571429 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.39285714286 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418417770929 0.236089414692 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131723360783 0.076458572812 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114331054593 0.0737576698707 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279752530179 0.150856017488 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688356596201 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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