Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.
Choosing the career is very important for every person. Everyone wants to become better and get more opportunity than their parents. However, some parent wants that their children to follow their footsteps and they avoid the children choices. Some people agree that children should choose jobs that are similar to their parents, others would disagree. I certainly believe that children have their rights and they can choose different jobs from their parents because many children have different opinion and parents should encourage their children in their decision.
First, by choosing a different career, children will not get bored and they will get more new experience. However, if they choose the same job, then they see their parents routine and their way of work. Soon they will get fed up with this kind of job and they prefer to do something new. for instance, I meet with the new friend in a neighborhood. we discussed our live past stories and events. she told me that her mother is a doctor. I asked about her qualification and I thought that she is also a doctor. But, her qualification is masters in teaching. I suddenly asked her that why didn't you choose doctorate. She said that she had seen her mother routine that how busy she was and how she tackle difficult moments in office. Therefore, in the teaching, she got new experience of life and also she is enjoying what she is doing.
moreover, choosing different jobs will help other family members which include sisters, brothers, and friends. they will get an advantage and have an idea about different fields of jobs.
second, during old days, when our parents were in schools, there were no advanced technologies and more fields. As century pass, more advanced fields are inventing and attracting peoples. for instance, my Father is a chemical engineer and during his studies, the scope of pharmacy was not established. During my studies, the scope of the chemical engineer is not wide and the job market is also saturated. So, my parents encourage me to choose advance pharmacy field and there is growing chance of that filed in the future.
In conclusion. parents should allow their children to choose the field in which they have interest. By that way, they will not get bored and will enjoy their job. If the children follow their parents in the job, then they will get all knowledge in studies easily and will get help in finding jobs. but the pros of choosing different jobs is more outweighed than the cons of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2069.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84543325527 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43374772151 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473067915691 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.979448236 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6296296296 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8148148148 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92592592593 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396676339654 0.236089414692 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105823790132 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104466600896 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23174027029 0.150856017488 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137997204129 0.0645574589148 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.