Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Everyday there are many news broadcast from news-maker sources about what do important event occur all around the world; many event that might not affected my daily life necessarily, in my view paying attention to this event is important since we need make connection with other human being for our mental development, and these event may have informative lesson for other people for their future.
First of all, human being is a social creature and need to make connection to share their compassion and emotion, therefore, being aware about what happen for other humans around the world, help us to share or feeling and try to impact on them by peaceful way. For example, banning some country of living in USA impressed many US citizen about this raciest decision, they begin to protest about this law ,and show to all around the world that the U.S citizen are not agreeing with each policy that the government lay on. So be aware of occurrences in each corner of the world, give us the chance to pose our beliefs about those and may have even little impact on it.
Moreover, beside our humanity obligation, consciousness about flow of world happening , improve our knowledge about further decision, for example perception about fail or win in some other human movements and the path that they choose for their goals, provide an opportunity to prepare ourselves for possible same situation. Following the event in the world is not just for curiosity, but also gives to us a wide vision for future.
To sum up, nowadays world is full of news and event that may not influence our routines, but our awareness about these incidents, show our act of kindness ,in addition thinking about such kind of occurrences empower us how to deal with recent, potential problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, kind of, first of all, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8903654485 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46367407055 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574750830565 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.1344086022 214% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.99822536 48.9658058833 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 210.285714286 100.406767564 209% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.0 20.6045352989 209% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.4285714286 5.45110844103 320% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214908153709 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106520212895 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283745360938 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132545458122 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297109803198 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.1 11.7677419355 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 58.1214874552 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.1575268817 186% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.97 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 10.002688172 275% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.0537634409 191% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.