Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to read or watch the news presented by people whose views are different from your own rather than the news presented by people whose views are similar to your own.
Since the dawn of civilization and industrialization, the outstanding role of news and media in every individual’s life has benn undeniable. Regarding the importance of the issue, a wide variety of aspects of news have been discussed and assessed for decades. Accordingly, an undeniable question that always has been the topic of controversy and brought about debates is whetter it is better for people to read or whatch the news that are presented by people whose ideas are similare to or different from their own. I adhere to the idea that different ideas are more beneficial. In what follows, two conspicuous reasons will vindicate my standpoint.
The first remarkable aspect to point out is that preventing from getting dictator and one-dimentional minded is of main advantages of read or whatch the news that are presented by people with different perspectives. It is crystal clear that being only exposed to ideas that approve what one believes finally results in dictatorship for these people can not withstand other ideas or methods. Furtheremore, it may become as distructive as making others do not tend to intract with such people; thereby, they get more and more soluted and isolated everyday. the statistics releaved by a recently conducted research in my contry indicate that people who avoid their minds being fed by different ideas are about 65 percent less successful in their lives which clearly illustrates the more one let themselves be informed of news that are presented by people of sifferent poit of view, the more they are socially successful, and accordingly, are abble to have better social positions.
Moreover, it shoud be taken into account that not only does this policy affects one’s ability of intraction and tolerance of opposite views, but it also escalates both physical and mental health. Indeed, people who are tangled with more diverse ideas are less strict about every issue in their lives. On the other hand, being strict and insisting on forming everything in a ditermined way puts one under a huge amount of pressure and stress which is the concern of the centry. Willing to be healthier and live a high-quality life, one has to be flexible in so that They can consider new botentials and probabilities that allow them sove every problem more easily. For the matter of illusrtration, people who are used to listen to different interpretations of the same news are more capable of doing the same in their own problems so they might fing something that they have not been able to see before.
In conclusion, I believe that is is essential for people to read or whatch the news that are presented by people whose ideas are different from their own based on a myriad of reasons only two of which were discussed above. Consequently, it is highly recommended that people try to benefit from medias that have different perspectives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, as to, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 15.1003584229 225% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2409.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 479.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02922755741 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89625474421 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507306889353 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 769.5 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.9909779381 48.9658058833 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.5625 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9375 20.6045352989 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262991195685 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884907437925 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953602988673 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192294242141 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782329726084 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 11.7677419355 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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