Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Each person has own preference for working style. As an engineer who works in a busy step,
I agree that having a job with three days a week for long hours is more enjoyable. Below are
some viewpoints that I support with.
First, I am a person who cares about working and life balance. Working three days a week can spare much free time for my hobbies.
For example, if I get four days off a week, I can plan a longer trip to the countryside. I can even spend three nights sleeping in a tent
and listening to the sound of nature. However, if I only have two days off at the weekend, the only thing I can do is wondering around in the park and
worrying about the work for the following Monday. Some people might argue that working with three days for long hours must get exhausted. However, I always
go to sleep immediately after my work done. As a result, that concerned might not be a problem.
Secondly, I like to concentrate on my work in a short period of time. I can focus more on my job in three days with continued working hours.
One time, I have a topic for solving the defect in the chip. I dedicate my spirit to work for the experiments all day long. After keep trying for three days,
I fulfill my goal perfectly. However, if my work is divided into five days a week. I might be distracted by many routine jobs. Besides, my thought might
get interrupted by each end of the day.
Last but not least, I am a person with high independence. If I have a job with three days a week, I can avoid some unnecessary meetings. Then, I can
dedicate all my energy to the important task no matter how long the working hour is. However, if I attend to my office five days a week, I might have to
waste much time on a boring meeting. That situation definitely wastes my efficiency.
To sum up, in order to get better working and life balance and improve my working performance. Working only three days a week for long hours is more enjoyable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39566395664 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45719817505 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482384823848 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9259339143 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.3846153846 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1923076923 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73076923077 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.53405017921 353% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392281605552 0.236089414692 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128946304732 0.076458572812 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111646241629 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159011651731 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103641085782 0.0645574589148 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 58.1214874552 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.