Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Regarding whether it is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation, different people hold divergent opinions. Some people would maintain the standpoint that it is indeed more important because Internet access can take you to anywhere regardless the space and time. I partly agree with their notion. However, from my point of view, I disagree with this statement.
First, public transportation bring us more chances for us to talk with others face to face which makes easy for us to make sincere friends. It is true that Internet can be so easy for anyone to chat no matter where you are now, but it is hard for two people to become sincere friends just by chatting online without talking with each other face to face and find whether they really like each other. According to a survey conducted by WuHan university in 2018, about 64% people tend to make really good friends offline because they think only the long duration of being together can make friendship or relationship convincing. Hence, the Internet access can only give them the chance to meet, the public transportation give them the chance to meet each other and have a interesting conversation face to face.
Secondly, public transportation brings you beautiful scenes in the real world which can relax you after a hard work or study day. For people today, Internet is common and most useful tools in work or study. Thus it is so common for many people especially young guys to sit in front of computers for a whole day without any breaks or going outside for relaxing themselves which can lead serious health problems in a long time. Consider my own experience which can shed some light on this issue. I was a fat boy who liked staying inside and playing video games all day alone without going outside. However, an opportunity made me go on the bus and saw scenery along the routine. The peaceful pictures really impressed me and made me form a habit to relax myself by public transportation everyday.
Admittedly, it is undeniable that Internet access is much faster than public transportation. Whereas Internet can only take your account to somewhere rather than your flesh. It is more important and valuable for you to feel and witness the whole splendid world by yourself.
To sum up, whereas some people agree it is more significant for government to improve Internet access, namely the regardless of space and time limit, bringing more chances for people to make sincere friends, coupled with relaxing yourself by seeing beauty after a hard day makes a strong case for more importance for government to spend more money to improve public transportation than to improve Internet access.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 768, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... the chance to meet each other and have a interesting conversation face to face. ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...and most useful tools in work or study. Thus it is so common for many people especia...
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Line 5, column 786, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...o relax myself by public transportation everyday. Admittedly, it is undeniable that I...
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Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...much faster than public transportation. Whereas Internet can only take your account to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2277.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93926247289 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64033473928 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511930585683 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 705.6 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.4316828671 48.9658058833 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.842105263 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2631578947 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348740579745 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107943573309 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114247918003 0.0737576698707 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243697072029 0.150856017488 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13749969643 0.0645574589148 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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