Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they already know how to do well.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Regarding whether successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they already know how to do well, different people hold divergent opinions. Some would maintain the standpoint that successful people always do the things that they know how to do well, because in this way they can gain more confidence to succeed. I partly agree with their notion. However, from my opinion, I contend that successful people tend to try new things and take risks rather than only doing things what they are familiar with.
First, the reason behind many successful people to succeed is that they are brave and aggressive enough to take risks and try new things. Thus it is exactly this kind of innovation method help them achieve their goals and achieve. On the contrary, they will not care about the things they already know they can do well because it means nothing or little to them even if they make some great achievement on them. Consider Jacky Ma which is the founder of Alibaba for example which can shed some light on this issue. He was just a common English teacher in China when he decided to found Alibaba, many people persuade him to cede and told him to continue being a teacher. However, he just said he knew he could become an excellent teacher with regard to his skills, so he wanted to challenge founding a great company. As a result, he chose the right way and because of his spirit of innovation, Alibaba has become one of the best companies in the world.
Second, under no circumstance should we leave ourself in the safe zone, once you have been in it for a long time, all of your passion would be faded and your competitors would catch up even leave you behind. Therefore it is vital for people to stay in a atmosphere containing risks and challenges, only in this circumstance can we grow up and become stronger. As a saying goes, risks are accompanied with opportunities, all the successful people are fully aware of this statement. According to a survey conducted by Wuhan university about successful celebrities in China, almost 4/5 of them succeed by ceding some comfortable things and environment and then devoted themselves into a new and unknown career. Furthermore, about 40% of them claim that it is the spirits of taking risks and being brave to adventure help them gain the achievements and level of what they are today.
Admittedly, it is undeniable that some people asserts that some successful people succeed by doing what they already know how to do well, but it does not mean successful people only doing what they are good at. On the contrary, it is the ability of trying new things and taking risks help them succeed.
To sum up, whereas there is an argument that some people think successful people only do what they are familiar with, namely gaining more confidence, the innovation they have gained to succeed, coupled with always putting themselves in a challenging environment to keep fighting, makes a strong case for the argument that successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they already know how to do well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for example, kind of, as a result, on the contrary, to sum up, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2582.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 540.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78148148148 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49096859759 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462962962963 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 781.2 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.8415892656 48.9658058833 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.894736842 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4210526316 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26315789474 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.498062920946 0.236089414692 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165490440046 0.076458572812 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166745530969 0.0737576698707 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.352103595177 0.150856017488 233% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174125861694 0.0645574589148 270% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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