Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support you answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
Friends are the people who always stand by our side in our good as well as in our bad days. But, we cannot always make sure that the people whom we use to call friends for several years would always be the same or always stay with us. Therefore, I disagree the fact that it is more important to keep our old friends than making the new friends. I would explore the reasons for this in the following essay.
To begin with, I would like to state one example from my experience, I had a childhood friend and our friendship was almost for about 20 years. We use to share all things like happiness, sadness in our life, we use to celebrate together every festival, never missed wishing each other for birthday, we use to do group study and many more things in common. But, all of a sudden life changed, he shifted to other city, as his father received transfer from his office to shift to other city. After this incident, we rarely talked with each other, even in this highly technology world he rarely tried to contact me or talk to me even after my lots of effort to keep the contact the things were not same as it use to be before. And finally one day I stopped watering the dead plant and moved on. To clarify, giving up on the dead relationships is not a bad deal, inspite it gives us more opportunities to be more social and find someone else who is worth of the friendship. And therefore, making new friends would give you new experience in life, as someone said it correctly "experience is the most important factor to grow in our life", and so we grow through experience instead of holding on to the things which isn't under our control.
Secondly, however, it is not likely that every time we would lose our old friends. It depends completely on the situation, sometimes the situations are bad not the person beliefs or thinkings. For example, I had a friend whom I met in my high school and it's almost 5 years for our friendship, he is too ambitious and pedantic person. Sometimes when he gets stressed due to his studies he mess up and also fights with me but this situation does not states that we are having a bad bond but instead after every fight we both apologize and gets to normal as before. Therefore, to be on point, sometimes understanding each other in bad situations can also make you realise how good the bond is between our friends, and holding on to such understanding friends is more worth then making the new friends.
Therefore, making new friends or holding on to the old friends completely depend on the situation, and its our decision that which things we give utmost importance, whether the lost old friend or trustworthy new friend!
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...lways make sure that the people whom we use to call friends for several years would...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...dship was almost for about 20 years. We use to share all things like happiness, sad...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...like happiness, sadness in our life, we use to celebrate together every festival, n...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...sed wishing each other for birthday, we use to do group study and many more things ...
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Message: Did you mean 'uses'?
Suggestion: uses
... contact the things were not same as it use to be before. And finally one day I sto...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... contact the things were not same as it use to be before. And finally one day I sto...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...stead of holding on to the things which isnt under our control. Secondly, however, ...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'messes'.
Suggestion: messes
... he gets stressed due to his studies he mess up and also fights with me but this sit...
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Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'state'
Suggestion: state
...hts with me but this situation does not states that we are having a bad bond but inste...
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Line 3, column 770, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...uch understanding friends is more worth then making the new friends. Therefore, mak...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...completely depend on the situation, and its our decision that which things we give ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2190.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 487.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49691991786 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52281771096 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47022587269 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.0 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7011228196 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.823529412 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6470588235 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214509302616 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073476372065 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728037040223 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14517541733 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402427013357 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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