Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one can deny that there are both negative and positive aspects of telling lie to our friends. Everyone have their own preferred methods, and all of them have their benefits. The controversial question which arises here is whether be honest all the time with our friends or we need sometime tell a lie to our friends. If I were to choose, I would definitely tell a lie in crucial situations. It is my firm belief that telling lie sometimes help us to stratify our relationship with our friends for a number of reasons, and I will develop these reasons in the subsequent paragraphs.
To being with, one should take into account the fact that telling a small lie sometimes can motivate our friend to try hard for his achievements. that is, by fabricating some abilities and skills that he has, we can give our friend a sense of purpose. Thus, he commences to diagnose his weaknesses, and amend them to obtain his goals. In contrast, when we tell the truth about our friend’s abilities frankly, he loses his impetus, so never attempts hard for his objectives. my own experience is a convincing answer. following my graduation from university, I drew up plans to start a small software development firm. I consulted with my friend, and appealed him to advise me clearly. he told me that you are not such a resilient person, and in the predicament condition you lose your confident, so you can’t surmount the problems. As a result, I lost my motivation and halted the project because I thought that I am not robustness enough to inaugurate a lucrative business. Had my friend encouraged me by generating lies, I would have managed my own company and had a prosperous life.
The second remarkable reason is when we say the truth, not only agitate our friend, but also increase our anxiety. In other words, when we reveal the truth we spend our day with worries. Of Course, there are some who argue that when we tell the truth we can amplify our relationship and readily relax and release tensions, I strongly believe that telling the truth in an unpleasant situation can lead to high level of the stress because all the time we are frightening about the result of what we have revealed. my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. when I was working as an intern in the local magazine that was adjacent to my home, my close friend came there to drop by. he asked me about his girlfriend and her characteristics. he expected that I told delighting futures, yet I told we were in a relationship before you. this fact agitated my friend and I was scared because I did not know what happened in the following days. I was terrifying because I had jeopardized our strong bond, and I thought he holds a grudge against me.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that telling lie sometimes help our relationship. Moreover, small lie helps our friend have a thriving life because we can give them the impetus and encourage them to follow their aims and because we can hesitate stress and diminish turmoil when we say lie.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, frankly, if, moreover, second, so, thus, in conclusion, in contrast, of course, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 109.0 43.0788530466 253% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2541.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 538.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72304832714 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81610080973 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77982972937 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503717472119 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 788.4 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3875668238 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7307692308 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0537697752243 0.236089414692 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0190589671425 0.076458572812 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245984414018 0.0737576698707 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0359123584844 0.150856017488 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180486383893 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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