Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, learning is an un sepratable part of our life and we are observing it's effect on any filed such as technology, anthropology, etc.. Although some people claim that leadership has inherently nature or in other words an intrinsic character but I do not think so. I believe that for being a perfect leader it is needed to try and be update in related subjects. I feel this way for 3 main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First, having enough knowledge both theoretical and practical about management is critical. Today, management is an academic course and has it's complexities. I will exemplify my point with a true story about something which happened to me. Upon graduating from university after 12 years, I got job. I thought it is easy to work as a leader. Not only did I have any practical experience, but I also proud to my self due to my excellent performance at college. I challenged with many problems in that position. As a result, being a successful director cannot achieve inherently.
In addition, effective communication is an art. As a manager you should be familiar with various methods for speaking with different people. For example, 5 years ago when I was boss in a chemistry laboratory; I should communicate with my personnel and colleagues whom were older than me. It needed very ingenious and tricky behavior for dealing with them. In addition, being a responsible manager requires to extend one's tolerance for ignoring little mistakes and on time appreciating of correct actions to improve group teamwork and increasing the efficiency.
Last but not list, however, some people may have better abilities for guiding others but according to an English proverb "practice make perfect", if you do not have experience about management you can achieve it. In above example about my job, after trying hard eventually, I could earn appropriate experience and became one of successful directors in my major. Had not I ameliorate my performance, I could not have my occupation now.
Overall, what drives people to become a prosperous guider in specific field may fall in to 3 categories including professional information, ability to deal with different rang of people and having proper practice. So, if an individual guesses that he or she can lead others, it definitely is not enough specially in our modern society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, for example, i feel, in addition, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1988.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04568527919 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02946186763 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624365482234 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.5985890519 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3636363636 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14826312725 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399666600813 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357571692241 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758943192877 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312732955302 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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