Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
In the modern life If you want to make contact with your friends, you have a large number of opportunity to get in contact with them. Technology offers flexibility to make our lives easier and comfortable than the past.
The system where I have been a successful student for the last 16 years has a large number of modern technology equipments, and I can only imagine the benefits of modern life. There are several reasons why I agree with this statement.
The first point I would like to make that there are compelling advantages to having different ways of communication which makes our life easier in the modern life. One benefit of them is that you have computers, phones, some different applications which will make your life easier in the modern life, therefore you have chance to live in modern era. For example, when I was child, I lived with my grandparents in their home. As I remember my grandmother told me about her past, and she told me you are so lucky you have this kind of things such as, a school that has computers, modern technology, full service, successful professors. She was living in a village in the past and she had not even have chance to study in a school. I was upset about my grandmother and I think of our lives that we are lucky to have this kind of things.
More important than the advantages to having different ways of communication is that in the modern you can use other public transportation such as subway, bus, plane to go to somewhere faster. On the other hand, when my grandparents were children, they did not even have a bike.
In conclusion, I have had this kind of opportunity by living in modern era, and I have been a successful person in living modern life because technological developments make my life easier and make me a good person. I can imagine that, for some people, technological developments may be hard to keep up with the times. However, I agree with this statemet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ake contact with your friends, you have a large number of opportunity to get in contact with them...
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Line 4, column 77, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ssful student for the last 16 years has a large number of modern technology equipments, and I can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64057971014 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74955305604 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469565217391 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0659928616 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.733333333 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230433332293 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936527906547 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530175581228 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140444628313 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445812586958 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.