Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People who develop many different skills are more successful than people who just focus on only one skill.
There’s no doubt that nowadays abilities and skills play a pivotal role in every individual’s life. Due to its paramount importance, There is a longstanding discussion among academicians, which way is better to succeed. Some people are inclined toward the attitude that people, who wants to succeed in life, Must have different skills and abilities. Whereas others exactly take the opposite perspective and believe in order to succeed, being expert in on skill is enough. As far as I am concerned, different skills are needed to succeed in life. In the following paragraphs, I delve into the most outstanding reasons to explicate my opinion.
The most significant reason coming to mind at first is that different skills can help you to solve any problem in your life and give you more experience and self-confidence. As a result you can conform with up and downs and can thrive thorough them. But people who have only one skill, do not have that confidence and they may struggle through their life difficulties. Based on a recent empirical study conducted in Denmark, 83 percent of people with different skills are successful and happy in their life; but only 27 percent of people with only one skill are happy in their life.
The second important reason that can’t be ignored is that people with different skills are more interested by organizations. Most companies are looking for those whom can do different jobs to improve their efficiency. Also some companies hold classes for their employees to teach some useful skills to enhance the efficiency of their employees. As a case in point, Jeep Company hold classes for their employees to teach a special management software to improve company’s efficiency.
The last but not the reason is that having different skills can lead people to have an extent information and that information makes them more innovative than people with only one skill. Since they have information in every aspect, they have a strong motivation and imagination to create something new. But it is hard for people with only one skill to create something due to their limited knowledge. The noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistics, revealed by recently conducted survey, shows that 87 percent of people who has an admiring creativity and use their creativity, have different skills and abilities.
To wrap it up, if one weighs the merits or demerits of aforementioned statement, one soon realizes that having different skills leads people to become more successful in their life. But that was a story in a nutshell. In fact, there are a myriad of other reasons challenging the above claims, which could be mentioned but there are not embraced due to dearth of time.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'whereas', 'in fact', 'no doubt', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231075697211 0.229887763892 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.165338645418 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.093625498008 0.0866891130778 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0438247011952 0.046263068375 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0498007968127 0.0685040099705 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.107569721116 0.118717715034 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0318725099602 0.0351676179071 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.90337274342 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0398406374502 0.0309702414327 129% => OK
Particles: 0.00199203187251 0.00188951952338 105% => OK
Determiners: 0.0697211155378 0.0887237588012 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0159362549801 0.0209618222197 76% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0159362549801 0.0139019557991 115% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2729.0 2387.08602151 114% => OK
No of words: 446.0 408.028673835 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.11883408072 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.365470852018 0.338922669872 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.257847533632 0.251872472559 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.192825112108 0.174417080927 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.154708520179 0.112833075102 137% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90337274342 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506726457399 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 57.7401643588 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.2380952381 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0718750764 48.84282405 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.952380952 120.699889404 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2380952381 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.644075263715 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 47.0228486013 45.7405998639 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.43076923077 1.45489161554 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274379087964 0.300154397459 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.120203701749 0.103427244359 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0860488002728 0.0752933317313 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.515711023447 0.497263757937 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.109289360948 0.151897553556 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100105438074 0.114077575197 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834016557404 0.0781384742642 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.270784395393 0.336927656856 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0427230758107 0.067059652881 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179025375837 0.210909579961 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551837829227 0.0618886996521 89% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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