Do you agree or disagree with the following statements?
Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this modern world, everyone is busy in making money no matter what it takes. To earn a huge amount people are doing different things. Some people are inclined towards the attitude that individuals should not do all things, whereas, others have different perspectives. I personally, though believe that we must do all things either it is perfect or imperfect. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons for support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that as our world is changing, the countries all over the globe having a lot of economical crises. The locals do not have any other option except to do multiple jobs. It is important to run a family. Drawing from my own experience I am a pharmacist but in my country, the pay scale for the medical profession is really low. To run my family I have to do work hard. I work as a waiter in a restaurant part-time and give take online classes to teach children. It does not mean that I am not good at cooking or driving. Moreover, I do everything with my full concentration. Therefore, this experience taught me that in end the thing matters is only your family not single or multiple works.
Secondly, it is good to do different things because it keeps the brain active and makes it more creative. It is necessary to perform things otherwise the brain cells can become useless. All people have different qualities some can do distinct things at a time and the rest of the people need more focus. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience my grandfather lives with me. He was accustomed to doing a nine-to-five job and nothing else. In addition, five years back when he was retired he did not have any work to do in his spare time, and day by day his brain and muscles are getting weak. Thus, this example clearly shows that people whole life is not spent by a single job. They should devote themselves to different works by learning them.
In light of the reasons mentioned, I strongly agree with the statement and I believe that there is no shame if you can not do all things perfectly human are not angels they always have some space for error.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52896725441 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56267489718 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549118387909 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3677799235 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1739130435 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2608695652 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04347826087 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316867822633 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893109418092 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739912410806 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209211535694 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432843557718 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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