Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students do not respect teachers as much as they did in the past.
Teachers have always been trying to teach students in the best way. No one can cast a shadow of doubt on teachers' efforts for the prosperity of students. That is why students should always appreciate them. In this regard, there is a debate among people on whether respect for teachers is decreased among students or not. In my opinion, students do not respect teachers as much as they did before. That is due to a reduction in parent's role for upbringing their children and lack of growth in teachers' salaries. My reasons are elucidated in detail hereunder.
First of all, parents spent more time on the growth of their children in the past in comparison with now. Therefore, children appropriately learned how they should deal with their teachers. In other words, nowadays, both father and mother should work, otherwise, they can't afford living expenses. Consequently, they have less time for upbringing their children. For example, when I was a child, my mother was a housekeeper. She always taught me how I should behave in school and especially with my teachers. Not only did she usually remind me of respect to teachers but also sometimes came to our school and asked them about my behavior. Whereas, my wife and I should work to afford our expenses. We can't spend a lot of time with our son. I don't know how he has grown up. Last time that I talked with my son's teacher he complained to me about my son's behavior. If we had spent more time with my son I would not have been ashamed for his behavior with his teacher.
As the second reason, despite the incredible growth of the inflation rate, teachers' salaries have remained constant. This issue makes teachers disappointed and irresponsible about their duties. When students see their teachers who have not the responsibility, they might do not respect teachers. My friend experience illustrates this issue quite well. He is a teacher in a high school. Last year the inflation rate dramatically increased in Iran. My friend's salary was not enough for his living expenses. Every day, after school, he worked as a taxi driver to earn more money. Therefore, he had not a good motivation to do his job perfectly. All his students had loved him before he faced that economic pressure. But after that, his students didn't respect him like before because he didn't his job so that students expected.
To sum up, nowadays, parents are losing their roles in their child's upbringing. As a result, students don’t behave appropriately with their teachers. Also, in spite of the growth of the inflation rate, teachers' salaries do not have grown so that they deserve and this issue makes them irresponsible. These are my reasons for why I believe that students do not respect teachers like in the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, in other words, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2287.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 473.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83509513742 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65496690704 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467230443975 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 685.8 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3861910496 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.2647058824 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9117647059 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91176470588 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258561690011 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718777907947 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917355460286 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19062009403 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550795231341 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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