Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only do what they know how to do well.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Taking risk and trying new things is very much common for successful person because they thinks it developes national economy and create more opportunities for many person. I am agree with this statement that successful people try new things rather than only do what they know how to do well. I feel this way for several reasons and described in later.
Firstly, Successful people have money and power. By using this they can take risks which is not they are used to. In my country, meghna group's MD is trying to increased his industry by taking new things. He is not used to this type of industry but he thinks that no risk no gain. Sometimes it causes loss but it is a test for company. It helps to make good decisions in future. He thinks that so many people will be connected because of new industry and it helps to many people to learn new things.
Government has a big role for this new things because govt. are ready for this type of entrepreneurship. Govt. are encouraged successful people to come out and create new things which improved the growth of country. If new thing is not occurred country suffered most. Population has been increased but job options are not increased. For this reason different types of industry is needed. Also govt should be lower the restrictions to create new industry and it helps investor to trying new things.
Trying new things are not good for every successful people. They are trying to stick with same model which gives their success. They are not willing to invest new things and thinks that if it goes wrong, it makes their huge loss. So they are not supporting new things. Successful people know which is best for their profit so they are avoiding new things.
Trying new things is very much easy for successful people because they have fame. By using this fame they launch new things and making good advertisements. It helps to other successful to take risks by seeing other company. For example uber is the most beneficial share ride all over the world and by seeing this pathao make this type of share ride and it gain huge success. Pathao gets more money by investor because of proper marketing and fame of celebrity.
Taking risk and trying new things has made successful person to more successful. They are gaining money and fame and power by this things.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
...mmon for successful person because they thinks it developes national economy and creat...
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Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun person seems to be countable; consider using: 'many people', 'many persons'.
Suggestion: many people; many persons
...onomy and create more opportunities for many person. I am agree with this statement that su...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...ore opportunities for many person. I am agree with this statement that successful peo...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ompany. It helps to make good decisions in future. He thinks that so many people will be ...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s which improved the growth of country. If new thing is not occurred country suffe...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... different types of industry is needed. Also govt should be lower the restrictions t...
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Message: Did you mean 'lowed', 'lowered'?
Suggestion: lowed; lowered
...industry is needed. Also govt should be lower the restrictions to create new industry...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it helps investor to trying new things. Trying new things are not good for every...
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Line 17, column 357, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gains'?
Suggestion: gains
...hao make this type of share ride and it gain huge success. Pathao gets more money by...
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Line 21, column 128, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...are gaining money and fame and power by this things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, well, for example, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71149144254 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37573562808 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430317848411 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5683204891 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.4482758621 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1034482759 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.06896551724 5.45110844103 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310225539308 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093430728943 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116457763948 0.0737576698707 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19329803614 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109499974282 0.0645574589148 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.