Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.
Nowadays, no one can deny the importance of technology. Some people may hold the opinion that technology causes to less creative among children. But others have a negative attitudes. As far as I am concerned, I disagree with this statement because, obviously, development in technology has many advantage in creative ability in children that we cannot ignore them. I will try to examine below the specific reasons for my opinion according to which I think are the most common viewpoints these days.
First let us look at what a children can typically gain from a technology. In fact technology has many benefit in learning process of children and children who learn more has more creative. By way of illustration, today we have many educational websites and television channels that encourage children to learn more and more and it is very useful and helpful for them. Educational programs have assorted strategies, including new teaching methods and new psychological facts that can bring many major merit for children.
There is also a more subtle point we must consider. It goes without saying that, large diversity of games causes children learn more creative things. Unlike the past that people only play constrictive number plays, today children have many plays such as computer bgames, logo and video games. Take my younger brother for example, when we ask hem about many different suitions, he has answer to all of them, but when I was young as he I did not not what I could do.
Finally, I cannot oversee the fact that using technology by children also means thinking about this technology and it means that they practice their mind nad every pschologist claim that if children ponder more about ideas and concepts, they have stronger creative in their life. To shed more light on the issue, according to the result of the study done in Tehran University children in every decade have a better creative than children in a past decade because they have to contemplate about more technology around them in the past. For instance, when I was child I always thought about creat animation and it not only made me creative person, but also helped me to ponder about other things that I saw.
Drawing upon the reasons, although there are always some exceptions which are excluded from the general rule, I do agree that benfits of technology in its impact on creative in children. To recapitulate the reasons, not only technology make children more creative than past, but alos let them to learn more things in their life.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in fact', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230769230769 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.151709401709 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.102564102564 0.0866891130778 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0534188034188 0.046263068375 115% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0854700854701 0.0685040099705 125% => OK
Prepositions: 0.134615384615 0.118717715034 113% => OK
Participles: 0.025641025641 0.0351676179071 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59339317865 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0235042735043 0.0309702414327 76% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0598290598291 0.0887237588012 67% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0192307692308 0.0209618222197 92% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0213675213675 0.0139019557991 154% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2531.0 2387.08602151 106% => OK
No of words: 427.0 408.028673835 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92740046838 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.327868852459 0.338922669872 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252927400468 0.251872472559 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2037470726 0.174417080927 117% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.110070257611 0.112833075102 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59339317865 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526932084309 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 60.236227597 59.2087087015 102% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.7222222222 20.5533526081 115% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5135644652 48.84282405 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.611111111 120.699889404 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7222222222 20.5533526081 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.722222222222 0.644075263715 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 49.0149622691 45.7405998639 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.34558823529 1.45489161554 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330696263813 0.300154397459 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0739899687361 0.103427244359 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0780998576083 0.0752933317313 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.497409893902 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.160241849867 0.151897553556 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114529139791 0.114077575197 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918382573744 0.0781384742642 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.284767253433 0.336927656856 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0724334973531 0.067059652881 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211324137824 0.210909579961 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905528491273 0.0618886996521 146% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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