Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
the world we live in is based mainly on the relationships between human beings.friendship is considered a very essential way of communication between people.but whether this kind of relationship should be in a certain frame or not is a debate.in my opinion,friendships are not judged by the numbers or how many people you know,but about their actual presence.i feel this way for two reasons,which i will explore in the following essay.
to begin with,your friends play an important role in holding your back,true friends will always find a way to help you when you need and give you their support ,you feel that you are safe with them.in other words,if you have one true friend,that will be enough instead of having many friends around you ,and you may not find them when in need.for example,i once had many friends when i were at university,we used to go around everyday and study all the time together. i got sick one day,i didn't fetch any of them,except one friend who was with me at school and then university.by that i mean,even if you had a massive number of new relationships,it doesn't mean you will surrounded all the way long by them .
moreover,social media in our time made so many confusions about this issue,you may make one hundred friend by utilizing some websites and applications,but ending feeling disappointed and lonely.for example,Facebook helped people to make a very wide net of relationships and you can make friends from other countries as well,but the question is,are these people really cares about you!i think it's a little bit complicated issue,it has many factors and many perspectives either.i believe that nearly all recent communication approaches lead to fake unreal relationships.you can not know the real intentions of everyone and you will end up in brain storming about such a lot of relationships been made in relatively short time!
in conclusion,i think that as long you have a restricted amount of real friends for a long time,that will be more healthy lifestyle and you will be more comfortable with yourself,i strongly believe that friendships are not about quantity but quality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, really, so, then, well, for example, i feel, i mean, i think, in conclusion, kind of, you know, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05397727273 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20233124562 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596590909091 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 88.0 20.1344086022 437% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 273.530619858 48.9658058833 559% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 444.75 100.406767564 443% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 88.0 20.6045352989 427% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 41.0 5.45110844103 752% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 45.0 5.5376344086 813% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240575158997 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14353306523 0.076458572812 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452088390925 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150986296071 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407520010215 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 46.4 11.7677419355 394% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -9.38 58.1214874552 -16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.10430107527 280% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.4 10.1575268817 358% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.41 8.01818996416 142% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.002688172 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 37.2 10.0537634409 370% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.247311828 273% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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