Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Friendships is one of the historical and essential humans need, people need to share their happiness and sadness, and be with some friends who understand their emotion. Today, due to social networks, some people have a lot of friends but the important issue is that, if they fell a great amount of happiness with those friends or it is worthwhile to have a few longtime friends to fell true happiness. Someone believe that have new friends are more enjoyable because it makes chance to communicate with different people, whenever, in my opinion, having a few long period friends is more valuable. The ensuing paragraphs explain reasons to support the statement.
First of all, we have a lot of things in common with our longtime friends which make our relationships close and closer. Some of this friendships initiated when we were students in elementary or high school. So, we grow up together and it is crystal clear that they have a great knowledge of our characters, feeling and our fears. Because of this knowledge, they can help us to overcome harsh situations. For example, when I lost my family in a horrible car accident, I fell lonely and I was depressed, my best and longtime friend help me to pass those harsh moments. Because she knows that I afraid to live lonely, she asked me to live in her home and become her roommate. Of course, new friends can't help us in such a dilemma because they haven't enough time to find our fears and feeling.
Secondly, long term friendships can make a sense of trust between two friends, because we have a long time to know our friends and test them in different situations. Life is full of ups and downs, So people show their real characters in these ups and downs and we can understand if they are trustable or not. For example, we just say our secret to whom we can trust them and whose are more trustable than friends that we know them for a long time.
In summary, we need friends to have happiness and enjoy our times, but it is important to spend our time with who we know them for a long time. It is because we have lots of things in common with them and we can trust to them in hard situations. Thus, I greatly recommend to have few but longtime friends to have happy moments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 411, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...friends to fell true happiness. Someone believe that have new friends are more enjoyabl...
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Line 1, column 411, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'Someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...friends to fell true happiness. Someone believe that have new friends are more enjoyabl...
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Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...relationships close and closer. Some of this friendships initiated when we were stud...
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Line 2, column 591, Rule ID: I_AFRAID[1]
Message: You miss the verb here. You should rather write: 'I'm afraid'.
Suggestion: I'm afraid
...e harsh moments. Because she knows that I afraid to live lonely, she asked me to live in...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 697, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...me her roommate. Of course, new friends cant help us in such a dilemma because they ...
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Line 2, column 741, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
... help us in such a dilemma because they havent enough time to find our fears and feeli...
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Line 4, column 263, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend having'.
Suggestion: recommend having
...hem in hard situations. Thus, I greatly recommend to have few but longtime friends to have happy ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in summary, of course, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53712871287 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50389731509 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460396039604 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6144638083 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.823529412 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7647058824 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199764045876 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725223898811 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572376690295 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141007603885 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607261933726 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.