Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Friendship is the main factor of being happy and successful because life fully depends on the relationship between people. Some of them think it is even better to keep old friends for a long time. Nonetheless, others believe that making new friends easily would probably help the person to live happily. From my point of view, the ability to capable of making new friends is always the better choice if someone wants to feel happiness.
To begin with, people can get an advice from many different perspectives of life if they have many friends. Thus, it will encourage the person to make the right decision for all the time. Also, because everyone has their own unique behaviors and personality, a person could learn how to communicate with others well. This skill is crucial in every work that builds the path of success for the person. From my personal experience, I could say that friends are always been there to support me whatever happens. I remember that time when I lost in Thailand, one of my friends who live there find me and borrow me the money that I need at that time.
Furthermore, a person will never feel lonely if he or she has the ability to making new friends easily. Scientists proved that the healthy life directly related to how much the person socialize and share their problems with others. Moreover, the person could get an useful information from all their friends. For example, one Youtuber switch off her phone for a week and during this time she made many new friends in a train, cafe and everywhere she went. Surprisingly, in a train, she met with a woman who shares an exercise that helps her to release the stomach illness she has. I think the real communication could bring a real happiness for people.
All in all, people become people when they really understand what true happiness is. I believe that friends are the people who teach about happiness to us and it would be always better to have many friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
...ness. To begin with, people can get an advice from many different perspectives of lif...
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Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...gin with, people can get an advice from many different perspectives of life if they have many ...
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Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... others. Moreover, the person could get an useful information from all their frien...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, nonetheless, really, so, thus, well, for example, i think, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69679300292 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4380186474 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533527696793 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.3425907562 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.5 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0555555556 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23158136738 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723159937722 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413851064969 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144635976424 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191479386498 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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