Do you agree or disagree that It is important to keep up with the latest fashions.
some people argue that it is important to keep up with the latest fashions. They cite the flamboyant nature of youngsters to support their part. however, I strongly disagree with these people and believe that being fashionable is in the sole discretion of an individual. The above viewpoint will be supported by two major reasons.
First of all, every nation practices its own customs and traditions which imbibes in every person the need to carry oneself in a particular way. For example, in India, the traditional wear of men dhotis whereas women’s could be seen clad in sarees. On the contrary, in foreign countries people of both the sexes are prone to wear pants and shirts together with a coat as their outfit. A transformation in the attire might only lead to a distortion in the cultural aspect of a country. Therefore, updating in terms of fashion need not imply a change in the attire that has been falsely registered in the minds of human beings.
Second of all, only those who wants to be a trendsetter may give more importance to styles regarding clothing, footwear or in fact, the aesthetic appearance. For example, business tycoons and technocrats must carry themselves with an ethereal dressing since their job demands it. however, it cannot be the case of a simple homemaker who cannot fit into a more decent look. Thus, situations enable a change in all.
To conclude, the issue of whether it is important to keep up with the latest fashions is complex. some have suggested that keeping up with the latest trend is essential as we are moving towards a developed nation with high class facilities and comfort at our doorstep. Nevertheless, I still contend that it may not be true for all in a general setup.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, look, may, nevertheless, regarding, second, so, still, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, in fact, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85570469799 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72356940024 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610738255034 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9121649828 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4375 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228070911 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761389647977 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134776035476 0.0737576698707 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147180151555 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117707783475 0.0645574589148 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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