Do you agree or disagree with the statement to generate electricity people should use clean sources like solar and wind and not use polluting sources like coal or oil

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Do you agree or disagree with the statement: to generate electricity, people should use clean sources like solar and wind and not use polluting sources like coal or oil.

With ever-growing industrial and domestic need for power, electricity generation is of a great significance. There are several methods to generate electricity which can be categorized into using the traditional fossil fuels and using clean energy such as solar and wind power. I would argue that we should use the latter in the following paragraphs.

To begin with, human-caused climate change and its consequences are among the most pressing problems in our era. Experiencing the catastrophic issues caused by this, there is consensus between people and governments to take action to mitigate climate change. During last centruty, a major part of the green house gases (GHG) came from using fossil fuels such as oil, coal, and natural gas to produce energy. Thus, an essential step to mitiage GHG emmision is to change our source of energies. Green and clean energies can be produced by solar panels, wind turbines, and hydropower plants, which are sustainable sources.

To add, transiton towards these realtively new energy sources requires research, technology development, investment, and training experts. Therefre, this transition is a huge opportunity for economic development. In other words, the capacity building required by going green in energy sector would result in several new jobs. Furthermore, these cleen energies are not as accessable as the traditionas ones right now, but once we reach to this ambitious goal of affordable clean energy for all, we can use these methods to improve quality of life in developing coutries. Developing countries such as countries in Africa and South Asia have enormous solar and wind energy potentials. For example, Kenya has a great potential for solar energy, yet just a few percent of its energy comes from wind turbines.

To conclude, I believe we should go through transition towards 100% clean energies; this is the most effective way to reduce carbon footprint of energy section, and it would be a great opportunity for economic development, especially in developing countries.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, thus, as to, for example, such as, in other words, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36448598131 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89195586761 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598130841121 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3422073156 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.8 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192848715488 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633231202578 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532054586299 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12374902813 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802677582778 0.0645574589148 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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