Do you agree or disagree with the statement? It is more important to keep your old friends.
I believe that as you progress through life you will lose connection with some of your friends, but you will also form some new ones. This is complitely natural thing and we can’t do much about it. Therefore, in my opinion it is more important to make new friends than it is to keep your old friends. I have couple of reasons on which I base this opinion and all of them will be thoroughly discussed in this essay.
Firstly, I think that a friend is someone with whome you are feeling comfortable with but also someone who can help you with personal problems and proffesional difficulties. Although your old fiends can help you with personal things, they offten can’t offer you an advice about current proffesional problems. For example, I had lots of friends in elementary school. It was fun time in my life and we really get along well, but I moved to the other city and went to high school there. Eventhough, I try to stay in touch with my elementary school friends I had to make some new ones along the way. This new friends helped me with all sorts of problems I was facing in the school as a new girl in town. It was not that different in the college. As I move forward in my carieer I needed more and more help so I made more friends that could help me with my problems. Over time this school or work concerning connections become true friendships.
Secondly, I think that different phases of your life you are looking for different features in your friends. It is important to suround yourself with people you are comfortable with and people with whom you share similar intrests. As we get older we form our opinion on certain things and find what it is that we really like and dislike. Our friends also form their opinions and have their point of veiws on some isuess. These opinions are maybe opposed to ours and we move along and find someone with the similar point of view. This is why I think it is more important to make new friends.
For reasons listed abow I think it is more important to make new friends than keep your old ones. Throug life you have to adapt to different things and new people in your life can help you with that.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: coupled
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Suggestion: advice
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 78.0 43.0788530466 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40852130326 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35921218288 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428571428571 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4853820579 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7619047619 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90476190476 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342432835706 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106895665986 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937468919519 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246953194449 0.150856017488 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440750012152 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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