Some young people want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible, and other prefer to live with their families for a long time. I can’t say that one is deffenetly better than the other because I think that this decision is purely individual and for different people different choices can be acceptable. However, if I have to state my opinion I would have to say that I think that moving out from your parents at an early age is the better option. I moved out from my parents house and from my hometown when I was eighteen. I started studies in the capital of the country, found my own place and started paying my own bills. I can now honestly say that this has been the best decision of my life.
First of all, this provided me my own space and my own freedom. I could’ve planed my day and not worry about will it affect my parents. I could’ve stayed up late studying or I could’ve came back home from the party in the midle of the night and in the morning I wouldn’t get some sort of a lecture.
But, moving out from my parents house also brought some tasks I would now have to do on my own. This include cooking, cleaning, doing laundry etc. Stuff like this made me learn things I couldn’t imagine I could do. For example, in just a year time I’ve learned how to prepare home cooked meals for me and for my roomate. Not only that I got a new skill I also got a new passion. Now, I can’t come out of the kitchen and can’t stop experimenting.
Last but not least, living on my own brought with it paying my own bills. My parents are not very wealthy people and I had to find a way to pay my rant on my own and to earn enough money for food, books, tuitun and neccecceties around the home. I found the job rather quickly but it wasn’t enough. It was clear to me that I had to do additional jobs in my free time to support myself trough college, so I did. I worked my day job and go to the classes by day, and by night I did extra work for online clients. I was not easy I can say you that much, but in the end it was worth it. I got really good work ethic and in that moment I understood what does it mean to live on your own.
In a conclusion, if my kid wanted to move out from home after high school I would totally support that decision. Being pushed into the grown-up world at a young age makes you do things you couldn’t do before, learn new skills and fight for survival. It gives you many quality feauters as a person and satisfaction that you have made it on your own.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 635, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... place and started paying my own bills. I can now honestly say that this has been...
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Line 2, column 177, Rule ID: COULDVE_IRREGULAR_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'could’ve come'?
Suggestion: could’ve come
...I could’ve stayed up late studying or I could’ve came back home from the party in the midle o...
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Line 2, column 281, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'sort of'.
Suggestion: sort of
... and in the morning I wouldn’t get some sort of a lecture. But, moving out from my pare...
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Line 4, column 583, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t much, but in the end it was worth it. I got really good work ethic and in that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, honestly, however, if, really, so, for example, i think, sort of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 92.0 43.0788530466 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2025.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 489.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.14110429448 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29246181361 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494887525562 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 616.5 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7419977682 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.56 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211485420411 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637358823993 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107779764199 0.0737576698707 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124270583504 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875969509158 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.73 10.9000537634 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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