Do you agree or disagree? The way people dresses is a good indication of his or her personality or character.
Historically, it was uncommon for people to think about which clothes to wear, for the only function of wearing is to keep warm. However, as society improves, in contemporary society, people consider not only warmth, but also other factors like outlooking. Some thus voice that the way people wear shows who they are. Nonetheless, if we take a deeper consideration, it may not be difficult to come to the judgement that the statement is improper to some degree. There are some reasons and examples to illustrate my points of view.
To start with, those who delicate themselves to work have no time for choosing the clothes, corresponding to their characteristics. Though they want to wear something they like to show themselves, they have to spare more time on the prior task, not the wearing choosing. For example, I visited google company last year, observing that the programmers there always wear T-shirts plus jeans every single day, for the sake of the lack of time, caused by heavy workload. Consequently, what people lacking of time wear indicates little about their character.
Another reason is that people are often demanded to wear certain clothes in some places. We could consider that in middle and high schools, students are required to wear school uniforms everyday, which leaves no chance for them to show personality. Besides, the workers in car processing factory also wear uniforms. On the one hand, they obey the rules. On the other hand, working uniform is cheaper and easier to wash, compared to their own clothes. Therefore, uniforms are not the personal indication.
I am not denying that everyone has different ideas on the same clothes, and the favor of what to wear. However, many factors affect the way people wear, like the rules, the time, which means what people choose to wear eventually not simply depends on the characteristics.
To put it in a nutshell, as an old saying goes:" do not judge one person by his appearance". Try your best to learn about his personalities form different perspectives, the way he talks, the hobbies he has, all of which will show you what the person he is better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ts are required to wear school uniforms everyday, which leaves no chance for them to sho...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, look, may, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 43.0788530466 19% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 52.1666666667 17% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2425.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 43.0 407.700716846 11% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 56.3953488372 4.8611393121 1160% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 2.56074960203 4.48103885553 57% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 108.875539861 2.67179642975 4075% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 42.0 212.727598566 20% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.976744186047 0.524837075471 186% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 12.7 1.51630824373 838% => Avg_syllables_per_word is high.
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 7.0 20.1344086022 35% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 191.927601146 48.9658058833 392% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 404.166666667 100.406767564 403% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 7.16666666667 20.6045352989 35% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.0 5.45110844103 275% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134035564168 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756922724766 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609448509445 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079384952663 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530597332716 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
automated_readability_index: 247.8 11.7677419355 2106% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -874.69 58.1214874552 -1505% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 137.0 10.1575268817 1349% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 307.18 10.9000537634 2818% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.33 8.01818996416 141% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 86.8835125448 23% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 4.8 10.0537634409 48% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 5.0 10.247311828 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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