Do you agree or disagree that young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities

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...ry of time to support their communities.I feel this way for several reasons, whic...
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...his also culminate to my total score at the the end of the session.Therefore I never h...
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...t the the end of the session.Therefore I never had time to participate in volunte...
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...emporary age and this has automatically force their teenage children to serve as bul...
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...r teens do not assist their communities.This is because of their academic activities...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, however, if, look, really, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, in fact, as a result, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93932038835 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92483180826 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54854368932 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 82.0 20.1344086022 407% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 380.104511944 48.9658058833 776% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 407.0 100.406767564 405% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 82.4 20.6045352989 400% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.6 5.45110844103 470% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.5376344086 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157524173562 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107007420974 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367486765519 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117721966005 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041624755756 0.0645574589148 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 43.0 11.7677419355 365% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -11.75 58.1214874552 -20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.10430107527 280% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 35.3 10.1575268817 348% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.56 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.04 8.01818996416 138% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 34.8 10.0537634409 346% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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