do you agree or dissagree with the following statement? because the world is changing so quickly people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than the past.
In recent decades, a technology explosion is happened in the whole world. The technology is developing day to day and it bring a lot of facilities for people. There is an argument among different groups of people that this rapid change in the world can bring happiness to people life or it may cause less satisfaction for them. In my point of view the rapid change in world such as appearance of internet and new technologies made people happier and more satisfied with their life.
Firstly, one of the good changes in world is development of the technologies, which made life much easier for people. There are many facilities for people by use of internet such as online shopping, etc. By this way they do not need to go out for providing their requirement and can stay at home and order what they need. In my country "Iran", some applications like "Reyhoon"and "Changal" made it possible for us to order food without calling to the restaurant telephone. And this internet shopping is very helpful for days, which people are tired for going out or in rainy days. Therefore, development of technology made people more happy from the life.
Furthermore, another positive change in the world in 21th century is significant developing in the medical science. In last centuries, there were many problems in cure of people and absence of good medical care caused many problem for human lives. But today, medical scientist produces the cure for most of diseases. For example, in many countries the doctor can cure the cancer, which in many centuries ago it couldn't possible to cure and in most cases the patients were died. So when people get such they are not worried anymore because they know there will be medicine for their diseases.
Finally, today the science progress made it possible for people to go on a trip in its comfort way. The planes and trains made the travel secure and also fast. People can go from a country in Middle East to another country in north America just in 24 hours, which is not possible in this time hundred years ago. As a result, by this comfort and security people are more full filled from technology progress.
To sum up, people are more happier and more satisfied by rapid change in world in different field such as technology progress, medicine development and ease of transportation. By this high rate of change in the world in future people will be more satisfied and the quality of their life will be raised.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
...hnology is developing day to day and it bring a lot of facilities for people. There i...
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...le. There are many facilities for people by use of internet such as online shoppi...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'many problems'.
Suggestion: many problems
...and absence of good medical care caused many problem for human lives. But today, medical sci...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...day, medical scientist produces the cure for most of diseases. For example, in ma...
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Line 9, column 257, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the diseases') or simply say ''most diseases''.
Suggestion: most of the diseases; most diseases
...edical scientist produces the cure for most of diseases. For example, in many countries the doc...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... cancer, which in many centuries ago it couldnt possible to cure and in most cases the ...
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Line 17, column 23, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...y progress. To sum up, people are more happier and more satisfied by rapid change in w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, for example, such as, as a result, in most cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89168765743 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81667284597 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496221662469 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9744513708 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4761904762 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9047619048 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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