educating children is a more complicated task today than the past or not
Education has always been important for children in the contemporary world. Meanwhile, kids based on their own personality and interests might benefit from learning more than others. The question we might try to address is whether educating children is a more complicated task today than the past or not. From my perspective, educating kids is a one of the complex task in today's world because of the following reasons: to develop the internet and network services, to be more interested in Playstation games, and to spend much time on social networks.
First of all, accessing to the internet is easier than the past which causes to spend more time on it. Children are not an exception in this case. The best example to illustrate this involves those children who spend most of their time on the internet which makes their learning more difficult. Moreover, they have no energy to study and learn. This point not only makes them so tired but also causes to be away from learning and education.
Additionally, another equally significant point is that those kids who play games rather than others have more problem in their own education. For instance, some children are interested in playing games with other ones which is more enjoyable for them; however, they spend high quality of energy on playing online or palystation games.
Last but not least, some children join in social networking from the beginning which has faulty effects on their learning. They join in some groups which take children away from their daily activities such as sports and education. This may appear somewhat shallow, but according to the recent research on children, those kids who do not waste their time on the mentioned ways learn things better than others which causes to have peace of mind.
In sum, based on the above mentioned reasons and my own perspective, I am on the side of the opinion which states teaching children now is not unchallenging like the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96048632219 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54540352244 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522796352584 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9867444629 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.8 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331929526257 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119549614758 0.076458572812 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138744857164 0.0737576698707 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176292028025 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143388292207 0.0645574589148 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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