Everyone wants to be as healthy as possible. Fortunately, in modern society there are many things that people can do to improve their physical condition. What do you think is the best way to stay healthy?
Getting exercise on a regular basis
Eating healthy food every day
Visiting a doctor regularly
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Continuing the life for a long time by being healthy is the essential will and purpose of today’s individuals. Personally, I believe that arranging meeting time with a doctor frequently is the most beneficial and proper solution to help people to be healthy. I have three rationales for holding this opinion, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, doctors are experienced professionals who know every significant thing about people’s health, which signifies that their advice and prescription can be well-founded and effective for patients or normal people. Many people struggle seeking appropriate way to foster their immune system and health from various types of sources including internet, books and peers. However, the knowledge gained from these subjective or baseless sources may be misleading. On the other hand, scholars of health issues will provide objective consultation to individuals, thus these individuals can accomplish their purpose, to stay healthy, easily and completely thanks to ingenuine recommendation.
Secondly, doctors can give advice to people about specific questions and problems, so patients will benefit from the advice since the recommendation is devoted for them. By contrast, information on the other sources can be generalized in some extent without allowing for that everybody has their own circumstances. For example, many individuals say that food with a content of meat is unhealthy for everyone irrespective of where they live, and how old they are. Nonetheless, people in my country must and can consume meat in a certain extent because my country’s weather is severe and frigid during winter. Thereby, Mongolian people who do not eat meat is not capable of passing winter because they cannot obtain nutrition from meat, which helps people to produce body fat in order to insulate body temperature. Unfortunately, this data is not well-known among Mongolian people, so they usually follow advice that they must not eat meat and fat. Then, they start suffering from harsh environment during winter in Mongolia. Conversely, if these people had followed the specific consultation of doctors, they would have improved the situation by eating nutritious food in a certain extent.
Finally, most doctors can be great companions of their patients, which means they can improve the mental condition of people. Many people feel frustrated while having diet, and regularly exercising because it might be challenging to refuse junk foods they love, and having strain of exercises. Afterwards, these individuals may give up because it is uncomfortable for them. Nevertheless, in this situation, doctors will probably motivate people to stick at their diet and exercise by reminding the benefit or just communicating closely.
In summation, I am of the opinion that regularly getting in touch with the professional medical advisers is the best way to stay healthy in today’s life. This is because their recommendation can be objective and well-founded, doctors can answer specific question, last but not least, they will encourage people to try hard to improve their health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, however, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2673.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 489.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46625766871 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96816440889 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552147239264 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 815.4 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9129378159 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.285714286 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7619047619 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211271990347 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619007409265 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470028939515 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129636866815 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528094342832 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 86.8835125448 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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