The expression “Never, never give up” means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I disagree with the idea that people should never stop trying hard for their goals. Some people think we should look straight at our goals we set and spend all our available time and effort to achieve them. But I think it’s important to think again about our goals and also take some rests on the way.
Achieving our goals requires effort and patience, so it’s not easy to persistently concentrate on what we want to achieve. However anxious we are of attaining our goals, I think most of us will find ourselves tired from making efforts if we think of them all day long and spend every hour pursuing what we want to achieve. So we sometimes need to take some rests, and during the rest we shouldn’t think of our goals. By doing this we can refresh and fully spend our efforts on what we are pursuing. This is rather effective way than spending all the time making efforts and making the efficiency lower because of getting tired. Actually, many top athletes are doing this. They really concentrate on their sports during training, and after the workouts they watch movies and play games in order not to think about their goals.
In addition to this, I think it is necessary for us to check how much we have proceeded to our goals and how much possibility we have to attain our goals. If we find ourselves far from what we want to achieve, we should change our goals. And if we are likely to achieve our goals earlier, we can make our goals higher or more difficult. We should stop in the way to think about what we have achieved and how much we have to try from now, and adjust our goals to more realistic ones. If we fail to do this, the result may be worse.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, look, may, really, so, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41935483871 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26644527698 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483870967742 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7460427526 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3333333333 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0853656797439 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494172966288 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634985247227 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773463453443 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362598647314 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 58.1214874552 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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