The expression "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is a saying “Never, never give up” witch means keep trying and never stop working on your goals. I believe that depending on a situation this saying can be a good or a bad advice. In this essay both scenarios will be thoroughly disscused.
First of all, this expression can be a very good motivator when you are working on something that you have been dreaming about for so long and you have minor or major dificulties along the way. For example, I have dreamed about beeing an actrice since I was ten years old. When I turned eighteen I moved out of my parents’ house and started an optimistic new life in the capital of our country, but living in the big city was not what I have imagined. It was a lot harder than I thought. By day I was studing art and drama on my university and by night I had to do extra jobs to be able to pay for my rent. In my free time I was looking for acting oportunities whenever I could. Unfortinately, there was too little open spots for a young actrice with no real experience. Every day it was just getting harder and harder and I really couldn’t see a light on the end of the tunel, but I knew that I can’t give up now. I have invest too much of my time and my mental health in this to stop trying. I step up my game knowing that I would have my five minutes under the spotlight if I believe unconditionally in my dreams and if I try hard enough. After four exausting years, hundreds of sleepless nights and tons of tears it finally happened and it was honestly the proudest moment of my life. This gave me hope that I can acomplish anything and thought me that I should never give up.
On the other hand, couple of years ago I had a boyfriend and I thought that he is the love of my life. We were very similar and we agree on almost everything. I was convinced that we will spend the rest of our lives together. But, at some points we started fighting a lot and not seeing eye to eye. I tried to keep our realtionship intact and to save what we once had but he wasn’t interested in that. It was like he complitly gave up on us. At that moment I knew that you must let go on someone or something if you tried everything and you can’t see any progress.
In a conclusion, I can’t really say that I agree or disagree with the expression “Never, never give up”. I think that this philosophy can be both good or the bad thing depending on the situation you are in. All I can say is that you should try working on your dreams as hard as you can, but if you can’t see any kind of progress maybe it’s time to let that dream go.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'bad advice'.
Suggestion: bad advice
... situation this saying can be a good or a bad advice. In this essay both scenarios will be t...
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Line 2, column 923, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'invested'.
Suggestion: invested
...I knew that I can’t give up now. I have invest too much of my time and my mental healt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, honestly, if, look, may, really, so, as to, for example, i think, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 94.0 43.0788530466 218% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2087.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 503.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.14910536779 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43078154099 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485089463221 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.9 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2063296109 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.48 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.12 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256234382898 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734664945181 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11917327388 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196250308286 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109826721148 0.0645574589148 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 58.1214874552 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.79 10.9000537634 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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